Edit the second and the third paragraph

The assignment about to explain the meaning of the dance that you see from the concert

Explain= give me the meaning of the dance and supporting them with evidence and what was the costum,music and light.

its two pages with four paragraph. but i will just show you the old dance and they are two paragraph. i want from you to change it to new one

I wrote it before but i need to you to change the first and second dance to a new type of dance instead of the two old one.

The new one are “Soar” & “First Moment”

I  already have the note

I will upload two paper 

1-note 

2- old dance

you can see the old dance paper and learn how to write about the new one by using my note 

If you have any question feel free to ask me 

I need it perfect and no grammer and spelling mistakes its due 24 hours from shaking hands