Due TODAY–Do not answer if you can’t do immediately–EDIT JOB

This is what I need, nothing more or less:

 

-All I’s removed in the WHOLE essay (Which I will send) –needs to be in 3rd party narrative–not 1st

 

– fragmented/run-on sentences, incomplete sentences, UNPROFESSIONAL sentences re-structured

 

-Format is CORRECT (CHICAGO STYLE). Do NOT change this.