Business Communications to fix the mistakes. Revise these sentences using familiar, short words for easy communication to this audience. 1.We must endeavor to correct this problem by expediting delivery. 2.The company must desist from its deficit financing immediately.

BUS 3382 Troy University Chapter 5 Customer Service Employment and Recruiting Questions
Course
BUS 3382

School
Troy University

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BUS

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Business Communications to fix the mistakes.
Revise these sentences using familiar, short words for easy communication to this audience.

1.We must endeavor to correct this problem by expediting delivery.

2.The company must desist from its deficit financing immediately.

Revise the following sentences to eliminate slang and annoyingly popular expressions.

3.We need a marketing strategy that will move us beyond the low-hanging fruit.

4.We should synergize our efforts to enhance our customer service.

5.The vendors we work with are super reliable.

6.Revise these sentences to make them more precise and informative.

We are currently recruiting young people for internships.

7.Revise these sentences to make them more precise and informative.

She has a strong employment record as an accountant

8.Revise these sentences to make them more precise and informative.

I spent a lot of time each week volunteering for nonprofit organizations.

9.Revise these sentences to make them more precise and informative.

If we don’t receive the goods soon, we will cancel our order.

10.Avoid the use of incorrect similar words.

We have less than 25 registrants so far.

11.Avoid the use of incorrect similar words.

The handbook offers advise on professional behavior.

12.Avoid the use of incorrect similar words.

I did not mean to infer that you had made a mistake.

13.The sentence misuses two-word expressions. Make the changes you think are necessary.

The purchasing officer has gone in search for a substitute product.

14.The sentence misuses two-word expressions. Make the changes you think are necessary.

Based off of the auditor’s report, I recommend that we invest more of our cash.

15.The sentence misuses two-word expressions. Make the changes you think are necessary.

This strike was different than the one in 2000.

16.The sentence misuses two-word expressions. Make the changes you think are necessary.

This letter is equally as bad.

17.Revise the following sentence to give it an action verb.

It is expected that our competition will be taken by surprise by the new ad campaign.

18.Revise the following sentence to give it an action verb.

It is believed by the typical union member that his or her welfare is not considered to be important by management.

19.Revise the following sentence to give it an action verb.

There is interest among our customers in a less-expensive version.

20.Revise the following sentence to give it an action verb.

The notes taken by the secretary will be posted on the website.

21.Revise the following to eliminate camouflaged verb.

We will get back to you after we have made a determination of the damages.

22.Revise the following to eliminate camouflaged verb.

Harold made a recommendation that we apply for a grant.

23.Revise the following to eliminate camouflaged verb.

We will ask him to bring about a change in his work routine.

24.Revise the following to eliminate camouflaged verb.

This new equipment will result in a savings in maintenance.

25.Revise the following sentence for more economical wording.

Due to the fact that we financed the experiment, we received a share of the profits.

26.Revise the following sentence for more economical wording.

I will talk to him with regard to the new policy.

27.Using the You-Viewpoint (LO1)

Rewrite the following using the you-viewpoint. You may need to add additional material. (Answers will vary, but should demonstrate understanding of and effective use of the you-viewpoint.)

We will be pleased to deliver your order by the 12th.

28.Using the You-Viewpoint (LO1)

Rewrite the following using the you-viewpoint. You may need to add additional material. (Answers will vary, but should demonstrate understanding of and effective use of the you-viewpoint.)

We have worked for 37 years to build the best lawn mowers on the market.

29.Avoiding Discriminatory Language (LO6)

Change these sentences to avoid discriminatory language. (Suggested changes are marked below.)

We are collecting money for a gift for our postman, who’ll be retiring this month.

30.Avoiding Discriminatory Language (LO6)

Change these sentences to avoid discriminatory language. (Suggested changes are marked below.)

The committee consisted of a businessman, a banker, and a female lawyer.

31.Avoiding Discriminatory Language (LO6)

Change these sentences to avoid discriminatory language. (Suggested changes are marked below.)

If Ms. Adams is not in, Joe at the front desk can help you.

32.Avoiding Discriminatory Language (LO6)

Change these sentences to avoid discriminatory language. (Suggested changes are marked below.)

Two company representatives attended the conference: a Hispanic engineer and one of our younger managers.

33.Avoiding Discriminatory Language (LO6)

Change these sentences to avoid discriminatory language. (Suggested changes are marked below.)

He is one of the best gay designers in the city.

34.Avoiding Discriminatory Language (LO6)

Change these sentences to avoid discriminatory language. (Suggested changes are marked below.)

These parking spaces are strictly for use by the handicapped.

35.Avoiding Discriminatory Language (LO6)

Change these sentences to avoid discriminatory language. (Suggested changes are marked below.)

Three people applied for the job, including a Baby Boomer and a Gen-Yer.